Black Star Five vs Thugz Wit Attitude

kane 2 is in Loocker Room whit Alrikovitch
kane 2: Hey, I think we have dominat EBB, but missing something
Alrikovitch: What ?
Kane 2: I no know but we have a war, we have the best superstars, we have power, we have everyting but we missing something !
Alrikovitch: you sould be nervous
Kane 2: Damn ! I have to do one thing !

Alrikovitch: Damn ! this guy is strange but is my partner ! Damn, he is crazy ! Super Crazy !
malboro: Alrikovitch, you is a boy and I is your opponent if you like or not like I have to kill you !

Others Guy appears in Loocker Room

Black Man: If you want I kick your ass sucker !

Black Man grap one sledgehammer

Black Man: I have one sledgehammer and now if you not run I kick you ass whit this !

Malboro flees

Alrikovitch: Thanks, but who is you ?
Black Man: I is one Monster, I is one Monster Extreme, I is one Black Man, I have one mask, when we have the mask we is one monster, when he have one sledgehammer we is Extreme, when we have the power and the flame and the fire we is a Black Man and ...
Alrikovitch: And... ?
Black Man: And after the match you see who I is and who I am !

sounds ok. but instead of marlboro flees. put marlboro turns his back and walks away with a grin on his face.

hey you guys from Black star five, check out my segment in the actual segment section, i need one of you guys to be part of it. let me know who you want to be part of it

any reply guess, or can i just pick one of your names from out of a hat?

I want . . .

ok now what i want is that u post all these segments in order from 1 to ... so i can just add them in the show... i want to kick the new season with your segments

I now have to go to street!
I can only do that at 19 hours

I'm back !

Sparda, this is all the segments...

Part 1

before the show on the parking lot
A camera is closing on Alrikovitch and kane 2 how are talking about something serious

Alrikovitch: you now what to do
Kane 2: I got it
Alrikovitch: I don't take no for an answer or else you have to beat it out them
Kane 2: is lauging
Alrikovitch: its time to go and find them
Kane 2: what are you going to do ?
Alrikovitch: I'm gonna wait right here when they arrive I have a surprise for the both

Part 2

The cameras have come far
Kane 2 is close to Max

kane 2: hey max, i have to talk you !
Max Alvarado: about what ?
kane 2: about a plan
Max Alvarado: hm... ok one plan...
kane 2: You gotta help me
Max Alvarado: How ?
kane 2: First, you can not tell anyone
Max Alvarado: Cool... but...
kane 2: no more questions and follow me
Max Alvarado: strange ...


the two wrestlers are going to run

part 3
The sequel of the star of Black star five

Alrikovitch looks when the 66 Aston Martin of aj tomko arrives in the parking lot

Alrikovitch: Yow aj you got my message ?
AJ Tomko: i got i got what do you want to say
Alrikovitch: i got the biggest plan of EBB history ....
AJ Tomko: what does that involves me ?
Alrikovitch: you don't let me finish Aj i want you to be part of that history
AJ Tomko: i got an question about it is it just you and me or are others involved
Alrikovitch: No No No but let's talk somewere else where nobody can hear us because you need to help me with the other
AJ Tomko: Ok let's go
Alrikovitch: smart choise AJ


Both men walks to the arena to talk about there future plans

Final Part

Kane 2 and max alvarado arrives at the locker room door
just at the moment they wanna walk in Alrikovitch and Aj arrives to

Kane 2: just on time we ware just set to go in
Alrikovitch: srry i had to convince him to join but were cool now
AJ Tomko: Yeah Yeah but i got a question What's the meaning of this
Max Alvarado: yeah i wanna now what's going on actually
Kane 2: Alrikovitch!! you tell them
Alrikovitch: i'm going to explain it after we handeld this

AJ tomko and Max Alvarado looks confused to each other
and still don't get the answer of this all

But the four men enter the locker room with kane 2 and Alrikovitch leading this group
and they see BOTAK warming up for his match

Alrikovitch: Botak can we talk to you
Botak : wait a minute man
Kane 2: we don't have all day now it's the time to talk
Botak: chill out man i have a match tonight
Alrikovitch: don't be scared boy, we are only here for a offer
Max , AJ and botak the reason why we are all here now
is to make history in EBB
Kane 2: your exactlly right partner we are the most dominant wrestlers in this fed
but we got allaws take the backseat for people like PATT sparda the tag champs Big closet
and last but not least B enforcer The Champ
Alrikovitch: yeah what thid they for us NOTHING so i called kane 2 and explaind him my plan
and he agreed with it
AJ Tomko: explain your plan
Max Alvarado: we are waiting the whole time for this
Alrikovitch:me and kane 2 has decided to start a stable and we want you all to be part of
so we can make HISSTORY in this federation
Kane 2: that's right so your in or your out it's your own decision.
but remenber we can be the most dominant force in history we can have it all
so think now and answer now what is it going to be
Alrikovitch: AJ!!!!
AJ Tomko: .......... OK i'm in
Kane 2: good, Max brother your in!!!
Max alvarado: Hell yeah
Kane 2: last but not least Botak
Botak: let me fight tonight my own battle and then i will decide ok
Alrikovitch: Botak we respect your decison and after the match were there to now your answer ok
Botak: OK


Need just one segment after the match of Botak so Sparda or PATT
can you fix that on how the match would end

This segment is in other day



After the match Kane 2 and Alrikovitch go to the ring

Kane 2: Hey, Listen everyone!
Alrikovitch: We have a surprise for you all!
Kane 2: Yes, it is clear that we have, I will draw the ring to our stable

Botak, Aj Tomko and Max enter the ring type and form a triangle!

Alrikovitch: Thugz Wit's Attitude this is for you!

The light goes off and leaves rockets into the corners, making a skull !

Kane 2: W E L C O M E - T O - T H E - J U N G L E
kane 2: And... if you do not like
Alrikovitch: Go To The Hell !

Ok thanks... it makes my job a lot easier... P a t t you can have these segments monday and part two i will have in my show

Admin(Sparda) wrote:

Ok thanks... it makes my job a lot easier... P a t t you can have these segments monday and part two i will have in my show

Sure .. just which parts exacly do u want me to use .. just nr 1 or more? tell me which and I will do it mate have u heard anything if the new system is gonna have a kick of at the season start to .. the new rating system for feds..

part one to part final...

Pedrobalo wrote:

I want . . .

K thanks for that, i'll add your name into it now

Kane 2 up to the ring

Kane 2: Ok, In Last Week, I Fight With Des Harding
Kane 2: What he just did was to choose his opponent
Kane 2: and you made a mistake
Kane 2: I have an idea in mind, that such a match tag team?
Kane 2: Well ... will be I and my partner and head of stable against you and your head of stable, Des Harding and Ricky Relentless vs me and Alrikovitch
Kane 2: Truth To The Game is in action !

I'm not actually in the stable at this stage. the week after our fight Ricky is going to recruit talk to me, then the week after that i accept (or later in the show). at the moment i'm still a drunk wash out as a result of my last feud

WHAT THE F*** ?
I have to do one thing

Pedrobalo wrote:

WHAT THE F*** ?
I have to do one thing

do me one favor.. I am gonna use ur lines in the monday show .. but do me this favor that all the part that u want me to use in monday show write down like this in a final post .. :

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Okej? than I will have a much easier job thx u .. and good work

in final part please !

The music video of Kane 2 starts and kane 2 and Botak appears in the ring
Kane 2 and Botak Grabs the mic

Kane 2: Hum... you know Des, we have a war of stables and... you are drunk, all right ?
Kane 2: but I have nothing to do with this !
Kane 2: Let me introduce the new five star wrestler, Botak!
Kane 2: Botak, it's now, it's time to start the true of the game !
Botak: You got right !
Kane 2: I know this !
Kane 2: but I also have reason to have your first fight seriously
Kane 2: Des, come to the ring !

Des Harding appears in the ring

Kane 2: Des, my old friend !
Des Harding: What you want ?
Kane 2: I want...

Alrikovitch appears behind Des Harding whit one sledghemer and smashes the back of Des Harding

Kane 2: I want... one handicap match, Botak and Alrikovitch vs you ! ! !
Botak: Hell yhea !
Alrikovitch: Until we no have this match you will not rest
Kane 2: and... if you don't like...
Botak: Go To Hell !

Kane 2 grab opponent's by the neck puch the Des Harding's arm and slam on the mat executing a Hardcore Chockslam

Pedrobalo, one thing .. I know that I didnt say anything before but if you want any of those storylines air u should put the final draft of them in actual storylines topic .. cause I dont always check this topic when I do the show but I always check the "actual storylines" topic.. this is more for brainstorming ..but once u have written the final segments put them in there .. or it will be really hard for us gms to be looking throw 2 different topics for segments..

and one more thing .. try to right all the new segments, in every segment that is not aired in the same show in one post .. for exempel:

you wanna air par1 - 4 in monday show
and you wanna air part 5-6 on fridays show

than use on post for the the part 1-4 and another post for 5-6.. and that goes for everyone ..

and that is so it will be easier for me to just move the post from "actual storylines " to "Used segment" so its easier to know which are new or old storylines..

otherwise good work with the writing.

Des, you will join in the same show ,,, i have an idea, let me just get the names and i'll edit this post



can we change the botak and kane 2 segment, where des gets smashed with the sledgehammer, and make it this,,,,, right........

to open the show or at least at the start of the show, MONDAY (patts show) cuz friday i got B the enforcer title segment going on, which i'm hoping to combine with this but i gotta make a few enquiries first,,,,anyway yh to start the show on monday, ricky relentless has his word with des, then kane 2 and botak come out and maybe call out des, but he doesnt show, instead ricky relentless and MC appear, and say if you want a fight, we'll fight you, then we have a tag match, and make it so a third member from black star screw us and you get the win, and after we get beat down and then des runs to save the day and thanks ricky relentless and shakes his hand and announces himself officialy in,


would this be ok,,,and for friday maybe you can work a little something out just to get prepared for the monday show, like des is once again drunk and maybe has a little scrap with botak or something? let me no if u wana do this and i'll do the ricky and des story,

even better would be botak vs des, then ricky has witnessed des face both kane 2 and botak, more reason to be impressed perhaps?

alkyvitch (lol my way of sayin your name cuz i can never spell it lol) alkyvitch can be the 1 who screws us,